How to create a sales pitch that actually works
Buy some additional, one-on-one coaching (see pricing), including a deep analysis of how, where, and with who your product fits in its markets.
Write it down in a script using specialist sales know-how and experience, test it on real-life sales opportunities. As soon as it starts working - which often takes only 1 day - you know you're winning.
Keep analysing, tweaking, and testing for continuous improvement. Some clients have done this with us on a monthly basis.